"And omniscient third. Which I shall share here as soon as its published.
Which do you prefer?" For this particular story I like close third.
Maybe I change my mind after reading the omniscient version but I think that then Jim's thoughts and actions must enter the tale much earlier. This would change the tale perhaps to much.
yes - i dont like reading it sometimes as its seems so remote - i have the last one coming soon which is that perspective - i found the close third hard at first as i kept putting omniscient third in with it - which is fine to do but this was a challenging exercise for me so that was not what i wanted to do
yes - i dont like reading it sometimes as its seems so remote - i have the last one coming soon which is that perspective - i found the close third hard at first as i kept putting omniscient third in with it - which is fine to do but this was a challenging exercise for me so that was not what i wanted to do
yes - i dont like reading it sometimes as its seems so remote - i have the last one coming soon which is that perspective - i found the close third hard at first as i kept putting omniscient third in with it - which is fine to do but this was a challenging exercise for me so that was not what i wanted to do
yes - i dont like reading it sometimes as its seems so remote - i have the last one coming soon which is that perspective - i found the close third hard at first as i kept putting omniscient third in with it - which is fine to do but this was a challenging exercise for me so that was not what i wanted to do
I felt her fear in your words!
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"And omniscient third. Which I shall share here as soon as its published.
Which do you prefer?" For this particular story I like close third.
Maybe I change my mind after reading the omniscient version but I think that then Jim's thoughts and actions must enter the tale much earlier. This would change the tale perhaps to much.
thx Paul - i just need to edit that one and will put it out over the next week
I like omniscient third, but it's much more difficult to write in an engaging way
yes - i dont like reading it sometimes as its seems so remote - i have the last one coming soon which is that perspective - i found the close third hard at first as i kept putting omniscient third in with it - which is fine to do but this was a challenging exercise for me so that was not what i wanted to do
yes - i dont like reading it sometimes as its seems so remote - i have the last one coming soon which is that perspective - i found the close third hard at first as i kept putting omniscient third in with it - which is fine to do but this was a challenging exercise for me so that was not what i wanted to do
yes - i dont like reading it sometimes as its seems so remote - i have the last one coming soon which is that perspective - i found the close third hard at first as i kept putting omniscient third in with it - which is fine to do but this was a challenging exercise for me so that was not what i wanted to do
yes - i dont like reading it sometimes as its seems so remote - i have the last one coming soon which is that perspective - i found the close third hard at first as i kept putting omniscient third in with it - which is fine to do but this was a challenging exercise for me so that was not what i wanted to do