When online love makes life unbearable
Yer creepin' me out here, Chief!! π¬π¦
Gotta cast my vote for the longer version-- it really ratchets up the tension and the claustrophobia.
And, of course, the stench when the heating's on... ππ¦
Nice work, May, thanks for the chills!! πππ₯Άπ¦
you got me laughing out loud Mark - which is jot an easy task atm! TY for commenting
Such a painful ending. I love flash fiction stories where every word counts!
yes this one was a bit of a grubby story really - if u know what i mean lol
Ooof you know my love for 100 word stories but I do like this version too.
I prefer this one. But I like both. π€
Yer creepin' me out here, Chief!! π¬π¦
Gotta cast my vote for the longer version-- it really ratchets up the tension and the claustrophobia.
And, of course, the stench when the heating's on... ππ¦
Nice work, May, thanks for the chills!! πππ₯Άπ¦
you got me laughing out loud Mark - which is jot an easy task atm! TY for commenting
Such a painful ending. I love flash fiction stories where every word counts!
yes this one was a bit of a grubby story really - if u know what i mean lol
Ooof you know my love for 100 word stories but I do like this version too.
I prefer this one. But I like both. π€