Wow mark TY so much for that comment! - 'The boy and the girl in the box' was on Medium first, but they never promoted or shared it with anyone but my followers - they really seem to hate fiction! Unless it's all fantasy stuff or happy endings :-/
Oh, that dreadful and desperately lonesome feeling! I've known it. It came across so well through your writing that it became a main character in the story. At least to me. This piece won't leave me too soon. Heart-wrenching and excellent.
Absolutely chilling. I could almost see it all unfolding... You have a heartrending gift.
Wow mark TY so much for that comment! - 'The boy and the girl in the box' was on Medium first, but they never promoted or shared it with anyone but my followers - they really seem to hate fiction! Unless it's all fantasy stuff or happy endings :-/
Oh, that dreadful and desperately lonesome feeling! I've known it. It came across so well through your writing that it became a main character in the story. At least to me. This piece won't leave me too soon. Heart-wrenching and excellent.
TY so much - i value your opinion - am happy if worked - even tho very sad story
Wow. Very intense May.
Thanks for reading asrai 😍
Poor Ellie, that's no life for a girl her age. That last line gave me the shivers. Powerful story, May! 💜
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"They’re getting into makeup and clothes. Whereas I’m just trying to survive." - that made me tear up.
What a beautiful story. It played with my emotions like an orchestra - in the best way.